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Re: Helpless Without My Friends
Right, I'ma go through the poem systematically for once. Here goes. I didn't like the repetition of "without no friends" (which should anyway, gramatically, be "without ANY friends", I didn't ...
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: darker times
I loved it. I didn't like the capitalised line though, perhaps you could only capitalise some of it, or use italics instead. Loved "It makes a tear drop from my ...
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: Drowned
aching for a Man who doesn't ache back *** i know exactly how good it would be to simply drift Away and Never Return Loved the first quote, it really ...
Dec 8, 2004 -
Re: Why I Hate Liking You
I hate that I constantly notice you, But when I’m around, you’re blind. I can relate completely. I think a lot of people can. Also, "Knowing that ‘we’ may never ...
Dec 8, 2004
